
To say the writing is amateurish is a gross understatement. It is downright childish. There is no structure, the pacing is terrible and it is glaringly obvious that NO ONE EDITED THIS BOOK. I felt like I was reading the rough draft of a grade 8 creative writing project. Worse, it stank of Twilight.
Holster, you might dream of being an author. But you need to be realistic. You are not a good writer.